Monday, March 19, 2007

Hey you guys! I know it's been long since I last posted. It's been hectic trying to settle down this semester....but anyway, I'll try my best to be around more often..

Here's some really good news>>>Nadal won his first title since the French Open in the Indian Wells Championship in California, so YAY! VAMOS RAFA :)

A good friend of mine has started blogging, you guys might wanna check his blog out:

OK, next up, I have this piece I wrote for a creative writing group that I'm in and I'd like to post it here..please tell me what you think :)

My foot slipped on the algae covered floor. The world turned upside down and I fell head over heels into the icy cold water. It slapped my flesh as I became submerged in the dark and still water. It stung me like a thousand knives penetrating my body, I fought, trying to find my way back to the surface, but I didn’t know up from down. I opened my eyes but I might as well have kept them shut, as I could not see a single thing. It was like being stuck in the darkest corner on earth, unable to cry for help, unable to help yourself amidst the deadly black. I kept fighting, trying to find my way back up, but I was going nowhere, the mass of nothingness kept spreading into eternity, there was no escape. I tried to scream for help but the darkness took that away too. It muffled my voice with its heaviness, no one could hear me. Slowly my lungs began to fail me, pounding against my chest, pleading for a new breath of air. My muscles were melting away, unable to move anymore without the aid of oxygen. I didn’t want to give up though; I had to see the light again. But it was too late my lips parted of their own accord and my lungs sucked the icy liquid like a vacuum. In moments my lungs became leaded with water, still, dead. I never imagined my end to be this way. It was a slow and agonizing procedure. My organs flickered into shut down mode, my body convulsing, and the blood in my veins rippling to a stop, my heart beating for the last time. The darkness around me faded away, and then no more…

5 comments:

3baid said...

Just wanted to say hello :)

ReD Lady™ said...

wa a5eeeeeeeeeera nzlte post .. b3d mror 1 month oo 7 days .. welcoooooooooooooooooome ;p

AnGeL said...

hey you made it, i didn't post anything yet lol 9bagteeni ;p welcom back :)

as i said befor, a very nice piece of writting, i realy enjoyed it and loved it :)

sweetd said...

whos ur new friend?

F. said...

3baid: Hello 3baid :)

Red Lady: LoL! Thankyou...shasawi ba3ad..all time for studying, no time for blogging

Angel: Thanks :) Glad you liked the piece!

SweetD: Boris is my new friend :D